As Christmas and sniffles ring in the air, I sit at my laptop and ponder what I want to change in my essay. With Christmas piano music playing in the background, I reworked the order of my paragraphs and reread the contents multiple times. I added more information in some paragraphs, tried to connect the feminist history with Glaspell’s Trifles a little more, and then read it again to see if that improved it. I think my additions improved it, especially with shuffling around my paragraphs. I may need to do one more revision after this. We shall see.