Revising the New Historical

As Christmas and sniffles ring in the air, I sit at my laptop and ponder what I want to change in my essay.  With Christmas piano music playing in the background, I reworked the order of my paragraphs and reread the contents multiple times.  I added more information in some paragraphs, tried to connect the feminist history with Glaspell’s Trifles a little more, and then read it again to see if that improved it.  I think my additions improved it, especially with shuffling around my paragraphs.  I may need to do one more revision after this.  We shall see.

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